Some teachers think that international student exchange would be
beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think that its advantages
would outweigh its disadvantages?
along with the development of technology and science, many people From all around the world has become connected. exchanging students among the nations is so popular these days. Meanwhile, some teachers opine that studying in other countries could have numerous benefits while others do not believe in the positive impacts of transferring youngers. Here some of the main proponents and opponents of this issue will be discussed.
From one point of view, adolescence is the best time for gaining experience in different fields. Therefore, moving to other states undoubtedly help youngers broaden their horizon. For instance, students will learn how to manage their life and communicate with foreigners which can lead to increasing their self-esteem. Also, teenagers might get familiar with different learning methods, and using these methods will come along with success in their lifetime.
From another point of view, undoubtedly, youngers are sensitive, and any changes in their lives could have negative effects. Hence, immigration at young ages may put so much pressure on their shoulders that cannot be taken by minors. Moreover, a sense of isolation is inevitable while starting to live in a new place, and this could affect their social skills. Last but not least, studying subjects in a new school, especially, in a different language may result in the lower performance of students.
To put it in a nutshell, with respect to the whole views mentioned above, exchanging teenagers have both merits and demerits. However, it is recommended to take steps carefully when deciding about children life. Due to the importance of youngers mental health and all negative effects following the exchanging process, it is better to replace transferring minors with weekly tour tips in order to gain some experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Along
along with the development of technology and ...
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Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Exchanging
... around the world has become connected. exchanging students among the nations is so popula...
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Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... impacts of transferring youngers. Here some of the main proponents and opponents of this i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76870977652 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646853146853 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9478634816 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111361166894 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352434237175 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305081469402 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674106959642 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038472470599 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.