The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
This report derives from the presented graphs delineating the expenditure on three types of musical albums by the British citizens according to their gender and life line.
Generally speaking, the lion share of people in Britain preferred to purchase a pop or rock melodies. Even though, Most teenagers and young adults accounted for purchasing pop and rock music albums, classical tunes favored most by the oldest age group.
A glance at the graphs reveal that, rock tunes sales was highest among people aged between 16 to 24 years followed by young adults (25 -34) with 32% and 28% respectively. However, in the case of pop music the numbers are quite similar in both age categories with more or less 30%. Although, 35 to 44 aged citizens tend to buy pop albums more than rock, their expenditure in these albums was never as high as 20%. Despite exhibiting the lowest numbers on each of these types of tunes, they were accounted for the greatest spending on classical albums.
In terms of gender, the sales were always superior among men compared to women. Though, the lay-out for classical was almost the same with below 10%, the spending on rock music for men was almost double than women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85853658537 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37343016154 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59512195122 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7960045239 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182510793855 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714092947656 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366550907976 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110120286912 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228971152323 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.