Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• say why a driving licence is advantageous
• recommend a driving school
• give any extra guidance/tips
Dear Sesa
How are you ? hopefully you and your family are in good condition. Iam writing this letter to give advice about your plan to learning drive
Actually, yesterday I saw you tell to your mother about your needs to learn driving and I agree about that because you can have good impact when you have knowledge about drive. I guess you should take a course as soon as possible because that is important, when you gotten a driving license you can easier to apply for some job related with expedition or travel and you can accompany your friend when they wan take vacation. i recommend you to take driving school at kirana, the location near from your home and teacher in there is capable to teach you because their has many experience. when you decided to choose my recommendation you should go earlier when you have class and focus when class started also you should pay full payment first for make your course can started fast.
thank you for giving the matter your attention and i hope to hear your reply soon
your faithfully
Muhammad Abdurrohman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hopefully
Dear Sesa How are you ? hopefully you and your family are in good conditi...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to drive'
Suggestion: to drive
...give advice about your plan to learning drive Actually, yesterday I saw you tell t...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...o your mother about your needs to learn driving and I agree about that because you can ...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...our friend when they wan take vacation. i recommend you to take driving school at...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...our friend when they wan take vacation. i recommend you to take driving school at...
^
Line 5, column 572, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much experience', 'a good deal of experience'.
Suggestion: much experience; a good deal of experience
... capable to teach you because their has many experience. when you decided to choose my recommen...
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Line 5, column 589, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... you because their has many experience. when you decided to choose my recommendation...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thank
...r make your course can started fast. thank you for giving the matter your attentio...
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Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...or giving the matter your attention and i hope to hear your reply soon your fa...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, so, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72192513369 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28019078844 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598930481283 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.3380290049 44.8134815571 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.142857143 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262437475794 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138434981273 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111067455909 0.0603063233224 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228362371982 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814874244802 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.