Dear sunji,
Trust you are doing good, I hope you are getting along with your new post at your place of work as the Manager of faithywealth fashion home, congratulations once more my friend. Am writing this letter to you to recommend an interesting book that I read last month.
I have not read and interesting book as "Things fall apart" in a long while, so interesting, make one think positively different from all ramification ones life and daily activity.
When reading this book "Things fall apart" it helps you understand the areas you need transformation as an individual, it help in your daily communications and creative interactions around people, at you place of work and home
I really recommend you read this book because I know how much you love to work on you self as person, you will really gain a lot of wisdom that will benefit you and your career in life
My friend you can actually get this book from any book shop around you or you can as well get it on Amazon.
Yours truly
Akumbu
- People nowadays work hard to buy more things This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 61
- Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it 78
- Water is a natural resource that should always be free Governments should ban the sale of bottled water To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action 73
- Some people think students in primary school secondary school should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill Do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...e, congratulations once more my friend. Am writing this letter to you to recommend...
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Suggestion: one's
...itively different from all ramification ones life and daily activity. When readin...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...eed transformation as an individual, it help in your daily communications and creati...
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...will benefit you and your career in life My friend you can actually get this book...
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...s well get it on Amazon. Yours truly Akumbu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78453038674 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83885446179 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60773480663 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 177.941563441 44.8134815571 397% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.2 76.5299724578 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.2 16.8248392259 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.4 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458161750684 0.216113520407 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208689088578 0.0766984524023 272% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137711852077 0.0603063233224 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263068725934 0.12726935374 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966762068866 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 8.37731958763 229% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 8.62886597938 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.