Government should not provide financial support to artists (For example, painters, writer, musicians …), and the government should let them support themselves.
Arts play a significant role in our society: Appreciating artifacts can cultivate masses’ aesthetic value and serves as an entertainment way for public to escape from the hustle and bustle of their busy life; Also, arts can also furnish an opportunity for people to get insight into different cultures and what happened in a specific period. From my perspective, artists should be offered grants from government.
First, art is a part of people’s life and support is highly needed for artists. As a matter of fact, the subjects matter of arts include people or animals living in different periods; spiritual values are also encompassed in the artifacts, like the rejection to the fusty traditions and antiquated criteria, desire for exploring unknown things, and so on. Thus, appreciating those arts can really help common people to get insight into different cultures and humanity in depth. However, most of artists can not support their creations since in order to create a artifact, they have to purchase expensive materials, like impasto and bright pigments in sculptures, flat canvas and paintbrush in paintings, etc. Meanwhile, they will travel to different places to search for inspirations, which takes them almost one year or even longer. In this case, they might not be able to get paid from patrons without finishing their works, making it harder for them to create artistically. But if government can offer grants for them, artists are allowed to satisfy their needs for creations and develop well-finished artifacts that can broaden public’s horizon.
Second, arts can make a city or country more attractive, promoting the commercial activities and the tourism industry. In fact, the government can be the patrons of the arts, hiring artists to design the buildings, create some sculptures and paintings and so on. The cities featuring those artistic elements can be more attracting. What’s more, artifacts can be placed in the main part of the cities, like the massive statue of a celebrity and the sculptures of some political leaders, attracting more and more tourists to pay a visit to the city or country; musicians can hole some concerts in the cities, attracting people who are fond of music to pay for tickets; paintings created by different artists can be displayed in the museum. All those activities can serve as driving factors to promote the development of the tourism and help to earn money for the government.
It is admitted that some may argue that the money gained from taxpayers is wasted in the artists since it fails to offer any convenience or improve the social welfare of their life. However, concerning the social impact and the appealing appearance of a city or country, such investment is actually valued.
In conclusion, government should assume the responsibility of supporting artists.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the artists') or simply say ''most artists''.
Suggestion: most of the artists; most artists
...ultures and humanity in depth. However, most of artists can not support their creations since i...
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...heir creations since in order to create a artifact, they have to purchase expensi...
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Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry, such investment is actually valued. In conclusion, government should assume ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2389.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19347826087 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8220464427 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528260869565 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.5979770875 48.9658058833 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.529411765 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0588235294 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162804459723 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651794614278 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740202686685 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121142624309 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103678935894 0.0645574589148 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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