Many wild animals have become endangered. Why has this happened? What can governments do to stop this from continuing to happen?
Recently, the mass media has reported on the extinction and near-extinction of many types of wildlife in the world. So what is the cause of that? What will the government do to prevent bad things from happening? In this article, I will give my opinions on the above-mentioned issues.
In my view, the extinction of wildlife has two main causes. Firstly, due to climate change and imbalance in nature, many animal species have lost their main food source, or cannot adapt to the environment; leading to competition for food between animals. Carnivores attack and eat smaller animals. Second, it is due to illegal human hunting activities. For business purposes, they are willing to kill elephants just for their tusks, cut off the horns of rhinos or kill crocodiles for their skins. All parts of wild plants are turned into fashion products or processed into precious medicines and healthy dishes.
Of course, the government will not stand by and watch such atrocities unfold. The government will come up with intervention policies to better protect these animals. Also make laws for poachers such as fines, imprisonment, etc. But before those laws can be enforced, the government should put up propaganda programs to promote understanding. know about the harmful effects of hunting wild animals.
Finally, the protection of wildlife is not the responsibility of each government, but also the responsibility of every citizen, every entity in society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...licies to better protect these animals. Also make laws for poachers such as fines, i...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Know
...anda programs to promote understanding. know about the harmful effects of hunting wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, of course, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24358974359 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93599696269 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645299145299 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8077743528 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6875 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159073216349 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456336182475 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662971958294 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849534035383 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838020349931 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...licies to better protect these animals. Also make laws for poachers such as fines, i...
^^^^
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Know
...anda programs to promote understanding. know about the harmful effects of hunting wi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, of course, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24358974359 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93599696269 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645299145299 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8077743528 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6875 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159073216349 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456336182475 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662971958294 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849534035383 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838020349931 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.