Essay topics:
Nowadays, young people have the tendency to stay at home rather than going out for outdoor activities. Discuss the causes and solutions to this phenomenon.
In the modern world today, you could see that technology has developed at a very fast
pace. Everywhere has technology and everyone has their own mobile phone. And with
the rebirth of social network, many companies has focused a lot their business on this
field and also the attractive of social network is very large. The young are now having the
tendency to stay at home rather than going out for outdoor activities. This has brought a
negative effect for young people. They just want to stay at home and do what they want
without going outside to have a lot of useful experiences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Nowadays, many young people tend to stay...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I do not agree with this situation. Firstly, Ill go over some of the benefit...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... this situation. Firstly, Ill go over some of the benefits of staying...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...s situation. Firstly, Ill go over some of the benefits of staying at...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ion. Firstly, Ill go over some of the benefits of staying at home. It cannot ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...pend on paid activities like gym, soccer,.... nowadays technology has developed ve...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is really bad for their development. On the other hand, I affirm that being o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Community
...eople to participate in the activities. community activities by organizing events such as...
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Suggestion: Both
...attract a lot of people to participate. both financial benefits for the organizers a...
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Suggestion:
...rs and improved community relations. In summary, it is a wrong choice for you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, really, so, in addition, in summary, such as, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88732394366 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86493414397 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498591549296 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5321007221 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.619047619 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286217694444 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889237845726 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718258886129 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213760887072 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470008426221 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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