The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city center changed after improvements were made to the transport network an the costs of using different forms of transport in the city Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feat

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The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city center changed after improvements were made to the transport network, an the costs of using different forms of transport in the city.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 100 words.

Form of transport
Average journey time before improvements
Average journey time after improvements
Tram
22 minutes
16 minutes
Bus
28 minutes
23 minutes
Taxi
9 minutes
12 minutes
Car
10 minutes
15 minutes

The bar chart and table give information of times consumption in a city center changed after improvements were made to the transport networks, and the price of utilizing vary of transport in the city.
According to the table, tram, bus, taxi and car are the most commonly vehicle to be used in the city. Those have changed the average journey time after improvements. Tram has shown a decrease of time consumption from 22 minutes to 16 minutes. This trend also followed by bus, which is five minutes faster than before improvements. On the other hand, the data shows more time consumption of taxi and car after improvement. Taxi is two minutes slower and car is five minutes slower nowadays. However, taxi and car are the faster way to get around the city either before upgrading or after upgrading, while the bust is slowest.
To get the fastest transport, passengers should pay 1.80 euro. It is the most expensive price. Passengers can save 0.80 euro of their money if they use car, which is just take 1.00 euro. The cheapest price to get around the city are bus and train, they require less than 0.60 euro.
In conclusion, this data can be used as a refeerence to decide which kind of transports people may be used.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68372093023 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53030950635 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572093023256 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.328234885 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4615384615 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234790240879 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789009789472 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116076457944 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171533109975 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164724494984 0.0819641961636 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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