During this exchange, participants will act as ambassadors for their countries. What qualities do you have that would help you fulfill this role?
I am confident that the qualities I possess are suitable for the position of ambassador for my country, Vietnam.
The first quality I believe will help me fulfill this responsibility is my desire to develop. This quality pushes me to learn and step outside of my comfort zone. Therefore, I am not going to hesitate to receive lessons, try new things, and reflect on myself for the better. It is my wish to come up with creative ideas and better solutions after each piece of advice and constructive criticism during this journey.
Another quality is my ability to deal with pressure. Challenges and difficulties are bound to happen, and I might stumble upon a few of them on this journey. However, I always believe that they indicate growth and try my best to overcome them. So, if I happen to face hardships during this trip, instead of giving up easily, I will bounce back harder, like a Vietnamese would.
The last quality I would like to mention is communication skills. In my opinion, communication between ambassadors is the most fundamental factor in this trip. Being able to humbly express and receive opinions and then consider each opinion thoroughly can lead to innovative solutions. And I have faith in my ability to speak and listen well in order to exchange ideas with others and have good results.
Hopefully, I will be given the chance to make the most of these qualities and do my best as a country ambassador.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78225806452 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74705404594 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600806451613 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1521898264 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259361015076 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874139042783 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580340667382 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142726828136 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254880329379 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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