Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Strict rules that young people should obey, an important element of quality life, have been valued and even triggers a heated discussing over society today. The principles that young people should follow, in some people's views, is too strict. Contrary to these people's opinion is my perspective that obeying these rules is beneficial, due to contributions to person itself and society.

What must be prioritized first is that following the rules is good for people themselves, instead of breaking them. To begin with, people could find the drawbacks of themselves when they want to do something that break the rules. To be specific, these problems will grow into a bad consequence if people do not notice them and fix them; Moreover, repairing the shortage is another way of cultivating their personalities. In detail , understanding what you are doing is the best way of knowing yourself; however, if someone did something bad and even do not know what he did, it will finally be a criminal.

What equally worth discussing is that obeying the principles is benefit for society. Initially, as the time goes by, recent society has more requests for people than before. Specifically, it is the evidence of social development. Additionally, the society will be peace and happiness if everyone obeys the rules; however, without following the total community will become a hell because of the crime. To explain it deeper, no one is a saint and never make mistakes, but after doing them, people should have the willing to fix the problems.

People themselves, improved by repairing the shortage, will cultivate their personalities. Society, recently developing, will stay in peace and happiness.To conclude, only by following the strict social rules can people and society became better.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...views, is too strict. Contrary to these peoples opinion is my perspective that obeying ...
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Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ltivating their personalities. In detail , understanding what you are doing is the...
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Line 8, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...oping, will stay in peace and happiness.To conclude, only by following the strict ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22916666667 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82352517131 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5787845444 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255393580149 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900056382818 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680250591769 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162560876646 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602923002402 0.0645574589148 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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