Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Opinions diverge on whether it brings myriad certain merits for a nation to host a global event of sports. Although this stance is formidably attacked, I am in opposition to it for some rational reasons.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that holding a huge international event costs a handsome amount of money in a nation’s finance. Take World Cup 2022 as an exemplary model, it is assumed that Qatar budgeted 220 billion dollars for this massive competition. Perceptibly, that can lead to numerous financial problems of a particular country and a clear demonstration of economic stagnation which are likely to have an adverse impact on the resident’s life.
On the other hand, I still hold onto the notion that a country can gain a giant profit when they accept to be a host for a global sports event. To begin with, a host country is capable of propelling the tourism realm by organizing these kinds of events. For instance, Qatar has welcomed an influx of more than 1 million tourists coming to their country this year for the World Cup and it is proposed to reach 2 billion USD for its economy in the next 3 years. Moreover, through holding sport-related events, a nation can arouse residents’ interest in sports. In other words, inhabitants, especially the youngsters in a country can be inspired and promoted to do more sports in order to boost their health by letting them immerse in the event atmosphere.
To sum up, albeit a aforementioned demerit of hosting an international sports event, I do ascertain that this trend is advantageous to a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...n they accept to be a host for a global sports event. To begin with, a host country is...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir country this year for the World Cup and it is proposed to reach 2 billion US...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e event atmosphere. To sum up, albeit a aforementioned demerit of hosting an in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84758364312 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92919819106 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9598224918 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.545454545 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214586865985 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787102020665 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341260806771 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13109295091 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263914940554 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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