The college years are the best time in a person's life.
Agree or disagree.
First of all, students get the full freedom in their college life. Most of the students are raised under the strick suervision of the parents. So, they enjoy this freedom in these days. To illustrate this my own example is enough. I completed my schooling from the near by institution. where i always have to follow some strict rule. At the same time this same condition at my house. As soon as i pletedd my schooling i went to college for my undergraduation. At this place i did not need to obey anu rule. As a result, of that i doing so much adventureois activity, which is not possible when i was at home.
Secondly, Students are coming in contact with many new people , make connection with them. This connection is very helpfull them in the future. This people are coming from the different region of the nation , sometime from the different continent also. For example, I completed my graduation from the State Agricultural University. Where most of the people is come to study from the different territory of the nation. Only few students are from local area. The are bringimg their own local snacks with them, when they coming back from the home after ending of holidays. Just because of that, I tasted too many dishes from the dofferent region of the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...ough. I completed my schooling from the near by institution. where i always have to fol...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Where
...schooling from the near by institution. where i always have to follow some strict rul...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...schooling from the near by institution. where i always have to follow some strict rul...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ouse. As soon as i pletedd my schooling i went to college for my undergraduation....
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Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e for my undergraduation. At this place i did not need to obey anu rule. As a res...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... to obey anu rule. As a result, of that i doing so much adventureois activity, wh...
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Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...is activity, which is not possible when i was at home. Secondly, Students are ...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e coming in contact with many new people , make connection with them. This connect...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...on is very helpfull them in the future. This people are coming from the different re...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... from the different region of the nation , sometime from the different continent a...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
..., sometime from the different continent also. For example, I completed my graduation...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...from the State Agricultural University. Where most of the people is come to study fro...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70089285714 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58308943057 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558035714286 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3527036001 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.5 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4444444444 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0407916125475 0.236089414692 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0135738828106 0.076458572812 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034081711463 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0341256680787 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341256680787 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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