Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability Others believe that there are more imortant factors Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability. Others believe that there are more imortant factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Schools of thought are divergent concerning whether the physical capacity or other important factors contributing to the success in sports. From my perspective, it cannot be denied that these statement are composed of fraction of the truth. However, this essay will discuss both perspectives and the reason why I ally myself with the latter.
On the one hand, several representatives of contemporary society deem that success in sports relies on the physical health is understandable. The key rationale is that there are some sports which are not suitable for players who have too many health problems. To specify, the winners of sport competitions have better performance than their opponents, this means the winners have enough health and power to achieve the victory. Moreover, physical fit provides much more thriving opportunities, which is one of the key factors to succeed. For instance, a football player with good health and ideal height can compete better or run faster than a shorter one.
On the other hand, I would argue that there are other essential factors contributing to the success in sports. The determination and nonstop self-effort can also help sport players to achieve the success. In fact, there are many people in this field can fulfill their dream of success in the sport they choose to play in spite of their physical issues and unfitness. Lionel Messi- one of the most renowned football players in the world is only 170cm in height, which is quite height-challenge in comparison with other players. Notwithstanding, he still follows his passion and becomes one of the most sought- after men.
To sum up, while some others reckon that success in sports fields depends on physical condition, I am of the opinion that there are other factors which are also very consequent.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'these statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; these statements
...y perspective, it cannot be denied that these statement are composed of fraction of the truth. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in fact, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1186440678 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81914087981 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552542372881 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3488652906 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229906055039 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779752424669 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702303500149 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15486797101 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643323244735 0.056905535591 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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