Social media is becoming increasingly popular among all age group. However, Sharing personal information on social media does have risk. Do the advantage of social media outweigh the disadvantage?
These days there is tendency of using an online plate-form such as Instagram, Facebook, Snapchats, Twitter etc. However, I strongly believe that there are more drawbacks than it’s benefits. Using an online platform is like socialise with other stranger folks but people need to be aware because many cyber crime happens through social media.
To commence with, Using online services platforms is helpful to build a relationship with one stranger to anther stranger. These are the technology who helps to socialise with someone stranger. However, To begin the benefits of social media is you can advertise your business through social media and sell your products online using online platforms. Furthermore online platform helps to learn new things such as cooking, studying and many more things.
Additionally, There are many drawbacks of social media like I mentioned earlier. People sell their products by doing doing frauds. There are many frauds happens online. For instance the seller sell their products and deliver us with different products and he never use to pick our call again. Furthermore, There is trends in youngster these days wasting their precious time in just scrolling social media. However, there isn’t the only thing people share their personal information to someone stranger led to cyber crime and many more scary things.
To conclude with, i believe there are drawback of using social media though folks use social media in the limit only. Whereas you can use social media for learn new things like I mentioned earlier and wasting a youngster time.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...products online using online platforms. Furthermore online platform helps to learn new thin...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: doing
... earlier. People sell their products by doing doing frauds. There are many frauds happens o...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...us with different products and he never use to pick our call again. Furthermore, Th...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...us with different products and he never use to pick our call again. Furthermore, Th...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'There are trends'?
Suggestion: There are trends
...se to pick our call again. Furthermore, There is trends in youngster these days wasting their p...
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Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dia. However, there isn’t the only thing people share their personal information ...
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Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...more scary things. To conclude with, i believe there are drawback of using soc...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42203170094 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517786561265 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1144479005 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232598696276 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882164370336 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995144944253 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165693603926 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736071613269 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...products online using online platforms. Furthermore online platform helps to learn new thin...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: doing
... earlier. People sell their products by doing doing frauds. There are many frauds happens o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...us with different products and he never use to pick our call again. Furthermore, Th...
^^^
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...us with different products and he never use to pick our call again. Furthermore, Th...
^^^
Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'There are trends'?
Suggestion: There are trends
...se to pick our call again. Furthermore, There is trends in youngster these days wasting their p...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dia. However, there isn’t the only thing people share their personal information ...
^^
Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...more scary things. To conclude with, i believe there are drawback of using soc...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42203170094 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517786561265 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1144479005 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232598696276 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882164370336 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995144944253 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165693603926 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736071613269 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.