It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation
Human have been changing their demeanor since yores; updated them through learnings and inculcation repeatedly nuance by nuance. Arriving at this stage they have changed in agricultural aspects, industrialization aspects and academics as well. Here I would like to accede strongly and put forward my statement that government of any country is highly necessary to spend money to improve internet access compared to transport system of any her country by several reasons as mentioned below.
For the first reason, internet improvement is a prime requirement of modern day world in academic as well as business realms. One can not deny the fact that without the network we could have learnt about novel research findings, space missions, sports prevailing in other nations. For example a parent, who is eagerly willing to inculcate his children to hone his skills in certain games, should make his son's gadgets connected with internet or data throughout the day, so that the children can use his device to open and learn at ant time he need ot he gets refreshed. Doesn't an opportunity of learning at the desirable time can make himself auto-didactic? Doesn't this eables him to make his mind with more aptitude? Moreover, fortitude business-minded people or elite group of society have now advdented to seperate phage of their developement rather than buorgeois or sub-ordinate group with the optimum, punctual and exquisite utilization of network; in a sense netork has been like a panacea to them.
For the second reason, the internet development in these days is imperative uttermostly in improving habits and behavioral aspects in pragmatic life of people.
Grand parents and their foreign grand children are having daily conversation in mobile phone, which we can entitle the situation as a boon of netork. Moreover one cannot stay aloof with the behavior that we need to maintain with our subject professors. For example, by replying our professors with assignments, reports before deadline is a major requirement not only in scoring but also in balancing pragmatic behavior in student's life. Does the public road available work on that case to send the report to professor? I do not believe so.
In a nutshell, accentuating internet improvement rather than public transport should be a high-rated subject of prioritization as network access to most possible corners of any country has now turned to be cardinal to people of academics to improve their caliber as well as in to contribute significant improvement in making behavioral life easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2145.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23170731707 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92064896262 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607317073171 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.320771021 48.9658058833 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0625 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243273774024 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627747533238 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882426726505 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141366876613 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817421776946 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.