In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing, and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In modern society, there is an upward trend of obesity while the level of human's health and fitness is dropping. This essay will discuss numerous reasons that lead to these difficulties and recommend a variety of solutions to solve them.
There are various explanations about why these issues appear. First, these days, technology and machines are replacing almost all of our actions. That means people do not need to work as hardworking as in the past. As a result, the calorie and energy that the body absorbs will accumulate and turn into excess fat. For instance, in the 20th century, people tended to walk on foot to travel while today, cars and other vehicles are the best option to take a trip. Moreover, since fast food and junk food appear on the market, our health has become worse. These foods of unknown origin have negative effects on our lives. Some people also easily have a pain in their stomach when they eat them.
Due to these causes, there are various ways that are mentioned to reduce the rate of obesity and improve human's health. To begin, citizens are encouraged to do several sports in their freetime. These exercises can reduce body fat and stretch our muscles. For example, going jogging or taking yoga is one of the usual options for both the young and elderly. Second, people should have a healthy diet. This includes vegetables, fish and a little red meat which supply numerous nutrients that our body needs. According to WHO, if we have a balanced diet, our health becomes better.
In conclusion, the number of solutions lead to obesity and the rate of the sick also growing up which can be reduced by these previous advices. However, in the future, I strongly believe that the figures of the patient will decrease by modern technology.
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- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them Give reasons for your answer and include any 78
- Compare and contrast two clothing fashion in two different countries and explain which one you prefer and why 56
- Compare and contrast two clothing fashion in two different countries and explain which one you prefer and why 56
- Compare and contrast two clothing fashion in two different countries and explain which one you prefer and why 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 520, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
...ients that our body needs. According to WHO, if we have a balanced diet, our health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82026143791 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33089939147 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5046528738 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.6315789474 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169696184647 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468043654768 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280759863971 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993252704298 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298112580512 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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