the bar chart below shows the percentage of people in Great Britain living alone by age and sex in 2004/2005
The chart gives information about how many people in several age groups living alone in Great Britain in 2004/2005.
Overall, as can be seen, there were considerable differences in the age groups of 75 and over, 65-74 and 25-44 with 75 and over the biggest one. Moreover, similarities could be seen in 45-64 and 16-25 age groups.
Females aged 75 and over were twice as many as males in this group, females at around 58% and males at 28%. This was true of the age group of 65-74 in which there were nearly twice as many females (approximately 33%) as males (approximately 17%). However, people living alone in the age group of 25-44 were more males, at 16%, than females, at 8%.
16-24 and 45-64 age groups were more equally represented which were male-dominated. In 16-24 age group which was the smallest percentage had 5% of males living alone compared to only 4% of females. Moreover, the number of males aged 45-64 were much more different from that of females in which males outnumbered females (roughly males 16% vs females 8%)
- The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink housing clothing and entertainment 67
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 70
- Many people believe that an international tourism has negative implications on their countries. What is the reason for it? What can be done to change the negative attitude towards international tourism 70
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? 70
- formal education methods, where the teachers instruct the whole class and the students work alone, more reliable and produce better results than informal methods. 70
16-24 and 45-64 age groups were more equally represented which were male-dominated.
16-24 and 45-64 age groups were more equally represented, and were male-dominated.
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 87 100
----------------------
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 182 200
No. of Characters: 815 1000
No. of Different Words: 87 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.673 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.478 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.473 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 42 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 15 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.287 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.495 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.743 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.182 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4