Medical technology can increase humans life expectancy. Is it a blessing or a curse?
In this modern generation most of the people are suffering from various type of disease due to lack of activities, changes in lifestyle, unhealthy diet etc., Nowadays it is very challenging to live a healthy life. I shall explain how the medical technology is helping humans, let us discuss in the following paragraph.
Firstly, we are blessed to live this modern medical technology, 15 years back the medical technology was not that advanced to diagnose certain conditions. Most of the people died due improper investigation, diagnosis is more important than the treatment. A proper diagnosis will help to give appropriate treatment to the disease. Early diagnosis will be easy to cure such conditions like cancer, heart disease and neurology problem etc., The technology will help to predict the exact disease, so the life expectancy will increase by treating it at the right time.
Secondly, a few years back there is lot of new born babies who were suspected of various problems due to not having sufficient medical technology in the fertility period. Now, the technology helps to predict problems in the 1st trimester itself so that it can help to prevent certain problems before birth. Even in the rural areas the medical technology will be improvised and get appropriate treatment for everyone and everywhere. For example, Recently IMA (Indian
medical association) released an article stating that most of the people were treated and cured completely due to modern medical technology for finding early diagnosis since 2005.
I conclude that medical technology is a blessing to increase life expectancy and everyone should get benefits for their life and extend their life span in the world.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21532846715 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77911740064 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558394160584 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1802217856 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.909090909 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298401534624 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107718779922 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967912549607 0.071462118173 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177712062771 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986520044734 0.0609392437508 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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In this modern generation most of the pe...
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...us discuss in the following paragraph. Firstly, we are blessed to live this mod...
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... to live this modern medical technology, 15 years back the medical technology was...
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...ease by treating it at the right time. Secondly, a few years back there is lot ...
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...he fertility period. Now, the technology helps to predict problems in the 1st tri...
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...or finding early diagnosis since 2005. I conclude that medical technology is a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21532846715 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77911740064 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558394160584 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1802217856 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.909090909 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298401534624 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107718779922 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967912549607 0.071462118173 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177712062771 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986520044734 0.0609392437508 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.