the use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in socity'do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Now-a-days, the social media usage is widely spread and consumes most of the time. The majority of the population currently are dependent upon social media as it provides information in timely basis and helps to communicate with others. But the direct face to face communication is lacking due to time limitation and several responsibility.
The benefits of Social media are plenty, most of the people use social media to highlight their day to day activity. They come in contact with many people around the world, some just communicate and some develop nice friends through Social media. Whenever a person post something in social media, the views increases, thereby popularity of that person develops. This helps few people with work also, for example - The ads and videos displayed in social media promotes gym trainer's work by increasing customers and some awareness of ads promotes business.
The people are working for almost 8-10hours per day. After that also they are not relaxing and interacting with others. Everyone needs a person or their family next to them to feel calm after a tactic day. The people nowadays are thinking they are fine after spending some time in instagram, twitter or facebook, but is it true. Absolutely the answer is no, because nothing can replace family time and face to face interaction with the closed ones and friends. The chatting time, having dinner together and praying together are special and can not be interchanged with anything else. Just a walking with the loved one can refresh you and empowers you to face another day. The chat with neighbours also improves socialisation as well as information. Everything can be gained through interacting with people next to you. For example, people from social media cannot come to help you. The people most to you plays the major role.
Although, there are lot of merits for social media usage. The disadvantage outweighs the advantage. Nothing can replace family and face to face interaction. The joy and love that is spread by the loved ones can not be interchanged with social media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun responsibility seems to be countable; consider using: 'several responsibilities'.
Suggestion: several responsibilities
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y. They come in contact with many people around the world, some just communicate ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05813953488 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61266364888 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508720930233 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6541459967 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0909090909 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326864541799 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100717658517 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657477132371 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204999717359 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408074708551 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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