Dear Sir,
I hope your day is going great. I'm writing this letter to inform you about organizing a dinner party at your restaurant. This is a gathering for my extended family members and it's going to take place next week Friday.
First, the reason I'm giving this party is to ensure that the kids get to know their cousins, uncles, aunts and grand parents. According to my mom, this dinner party signifies a long awaited get together for the whole family to eat, meet and talk. It's definitely going to be awesome!
In addition to things I said earlier, I'd prefer that the dinner should be a buffet. You remember the appetizer I had at your restaurant the last time? We would need to have that before our main meal. Also, make arrangements for a crate of neither Budweiser nor Tiger beer for us. I'd need soft drinks too, because of the kids. Everybody needs to be carried along; it's a great outing.
Lastly, I would like to know whether we are going to stay in the general or private section of your outfit? Plans have been made but we can make adjustments.
I hope to hear from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Grant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Sir, I hope your day is going great. Im writing this letter to inform you about...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ring for my extended family members and its going to take place next week Friday. ...
^^^
Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...next week Friday. First, the reason Im giving this party is to ensure that the...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...the whole family to eat, meet and talk. Its definitely going to be awesome! In ...
^^^
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... In addition to things I said earlier, Id prefer that the dinner should be a buff...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Id) must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...n addition to things I said earlier, Id prefer that the dinner should be a buffet. You...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...either Budweiser nor Tiger beer for us. Id need soft drinks too, because of the ki...
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Line 7, column 364, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s. Everybody needs to be carried along; its a great outing. Lastly, I would lik...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32860263981 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.983051067 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149842012697 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046682511657 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056790623534 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786736751512 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406952563952 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.