The claim states that policies which are eco friendly should not be imposed on multinational organizations as they boost the economy, here economy of a country is more favored than a cleaner Earth and therefore I strongly condemn the statement.
The norms imposed by the authorities regarding the protection of environment must be followed in order to keep the people and the place around the organizations to be safe, it is scientifically proven that the pollutions effected by the factories have a long way circumstances among the generations." Any wild animal without a leash is a danger to the society". If the industries are given the power to follow their own rules they can put others around them in a bad position.
First example is Bhopal Gas Tragedy, which is caused in India is similar consequence which happened when the industries are not following the policies, it involved a leakage a harmful substance in the form of a gas which lead the people around it to have cancer and many of them dies in this tragedy, it is still one of the biggest human tragedies occurred in the country.
Other few examples being two largest human disasters which occurred in our world, Chernobyl Nuclear power plant and Fukushima in Japan, the former was caused by the silliest human mistake by the plant manager at a late night which led to the plant being bombed from the inside which expose the Nuclear elements such as Uranium and Plutonium, this led to a millions and millions of deaths near the power plant and it still cannot be rectified since the place is completely abandoned, and the later example Fukushima which also runs along the similar lines of the former power plant.
Many other examples serve for this purpose such as powerful nations like USA, Russia, and etc. for their usage of nuclear bombs for the experimentation on the smaller vacated islands, another examples caused by this situation is the bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki in the second World war, there were huge implications faced by the two cities caused by silly unexercised bombing by the United states.
The aforementioned examples of the multinational organizations trifling with their power to not follow the eco-friendly rules imposed either by the UN or by higher officials can lead to worst case scenarios and for that situation the claim posed stands false .
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...leash is a danger to the society'. If the industries are given the power to f...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...bstance in the form of a gas which lead the people around it to have cancer and many of them dies in...
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Line 4, column 355, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a million'
Suggestion: a million
...h as Uranium and Plutonium, this led to a millions and millions of deaths near the power p...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...h as powerful nations like USA, Russia, and etc. for their usage of nuclear bombs for th...
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Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the worst'.
Suggestion: to the worst
... the UN or by higher officials can lead to worst case scenarios and for that situatio...
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Line 6, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... higher officials can lead to worst case scenarios and for that situation the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icials can lead to worst case scenarios and for that situation the claim pos...
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...case scenarios and for that situation the claim posed stands false .
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ios and for that situation the claim posed stands false .
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Line 6, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat situation the claim posed stands false .
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Line 6, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tuation the claim posed stands false .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, second, so, still, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9595959596 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82779446285 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 23.0359550562 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.850737057 60.3974514979 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.5 118.986275619 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.5 23.4991977007 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161542369437 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073827998223 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781564979234 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902402464589 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854403250541 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 14.1392134831 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 48.8420337079 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.1743820225 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 11.2143820225 193% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...leash is a danger to the society'. If the industries are given the power to f...
^^
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...bstance in the form of a gas which lead the people around it to have cancer and many of them dies in...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 355, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a million'
Suggestion: a million
...h as Uranium and Plutonium, this led to a millions and millions of deaths near the power p...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...h as powerful nations like USA, Russia, and etc. for their usage of nuclear bombs for th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the worst'.
Suggestion: to the worst
... the UN or by higher officials can lead to worst case scenarios and for that situatio...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... higher officials can lead to worst case scenarios and for that situation the...
^^
Line 6, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icials can lead to worst case scenarios and for that situation the claim pos...
^^
Line 6, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to worst case scenarios and for that situation the claim posed stands fal...
^^
Line 6, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...case scenarios and for that situation the claim posed stands false .
^^^
Line 6, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ios and for that situation the claim posed stands false .
^^
Line 6, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat situation the claim posed stands false .
^^
Line 6, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tuation the claim posed stands false .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, second, so, still, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9595959596 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82779446285 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 23.0359550562 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.850737057 60.3974514979 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.5 118.986275619 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.5 23.4991977007 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161542369437 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073827998223 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781564979234 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902402464589 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854403250541 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 14.1392134831 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 48.8420337079 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.1743820225 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 11.2143820225 193% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.