Impose heavy taxes on sugary foods and drinks is good or not? Discuss both views and state your opinion
People’s opinions differ as to whether or not fast food should be taxed by governments. While there are some strong arguments agree with this because it can benefit both individuals and governments, I still believe that it should not be implemented.
On one hand, putting taxes on sweat foods and beverages is a clever decision because it not only benefits individuals but also governmetns in certain extend. In other words, these kind of foodstuffs contain savory flavors with feel-good ingredients, including sugars, trans fats, and artificial sweetener, which make customers feel more enjoyable. However, overconsuming suger foodstuffs can have some side-effects, which cause them easily getting obesity, diabetes and many other health-related issues. Further more, the less diseases people have, the less burden on the health care systems, which directly boost the financial of country.
On the other hand, there are some undeniable reasons why people disagree with this specific tax law. Firstly, although there are some taxes on harmful items such as tobacco and alcohol, many people still consume them frequently. Therefore, many thinking that putting taxes on sugar foods and beverages will not make a difference. Secondly, some also point out that the tax law may put food and drinks companies,which are a massive part of society's economy, under pressure. That means, when their revenues decline as a result of many people no longer purchasing their items, businesses may provide discounts on their products in order to encourage people to buy them again, which means the taxes are useless. Moreover, when the prices decrease, employee salaries also do so, which is a great burden on individuals and society.
In conclusion, while putting taxes on fast food does have some effects, this law should not be implemented because it will cause a great burden on the public and governments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
People’s opinions differ as to whether or not fast food should be taxed by government...
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Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...viduals but also governmetns in certain extend. In other words, these kind of foodstuf...
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Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...etns in certain extend. In other words, these kind of foodstuffs contain savory flavors wi...
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Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun diseases is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ealth-related issues. Further more, the less diseases people have, the less burden o...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ax law may put food and drinks companies,which are a massive part of societys economy,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7605373873 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593333333333 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.828099384 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4615384615 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12208401254 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502768414211 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443554032061 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781317289176 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247408599511 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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