The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line chart depicts visitors who had a journey to a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.

Overall, the total number of tourists rose over the period of 7 years. The figure for staying on the island was the lowest in 2010, the reverse pattern was seen in the end of the period.

According to the graph, the people staying on the island was stable for one year then increased steadily in 1.5 millions during the following years, though it experienced a marginal dip in 2016. Meanwhile, the ones who desired to stay on cruises in 2010 took the minority of just only a quarter of a million, then it skyrocketed after a tiny dip in 2021, then finally reached its peak in the end ( with million and a half tourists ). The most noticeable feature is that until 2015, the figure for sleeping in ships was always lower than its comparing figure, then it took the majority for the rest two years.

The total number of visitors in 2010 was only a million, with over three-fourth of them chosen to stay on ships. Until 2017, the number steadily increased, finally reached three million and a half, and the majority figure saw an opposition, when the ones decide to stay on island took over a half.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he end with million and a half tourists . The most noticeable feature is that unt...
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...to stay on island took over a half.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56744186047 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35292699251 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525581395349 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.377011457 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123151715798 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653438149879 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340949557473 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937155452339 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318523631786 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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