Rules and laws keep society stable. It cannot work if individuals are free to do whatever they want. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Why?
Nowadays, we are living in a society where everything around us is associated with rules and laws. Nobody today has the privilege and the freedom to do whatever they want. Personally, I totally agree with this statement for various reasons which should be carefully considered.
First and foremost, it is an undeniable fact that obeying authorities' rules go hand in hand with the safety and the well-being of society overall. For instance, as far as traffic rules are concerned, all drivers have the responsibility to adhere to the traffic signals and plates such as stop in order to avoid serious car accidents. Besides that, in many countries, recycling waste is a mandatory rule for all citizens. Thus, this enactment is highly beneficial for the protection of the environment and of our neighbourhood alike.
In addition, all laws have been enacted to ensure the harmony of our community. We can not imagine a world without legislation and punishments ,as all criminals will continue to live between us. Moreover, the existence of laws gives us the opportunity to become more conscious citizens. For example, if someone neglects to pay his tax, by law, he should be punished and should pay a fare. As a result, he learns to not repeat the same mistakes and be a more responsible person.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that laws and rules are considered to be an indispensable part of our lives. Unfortunately, we do not have the possibility to do whatever we want to, as we are living in a very equal society which should be balanced in order to survive.
- Environmental damage is the problem of most countries What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
- Rules and laws keep society stable It cannot work if individuals are free to do whatever they want Do you agree or disagree with this opinion Why 89
- Rules and laws keep society stable It cannot work if individuals are free to do whatever they want Do you agree or disagree with this opinion Why 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89138576779 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92097856106 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0729884666 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194244206179 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650685847642 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627221352175 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132613605209 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813419116834 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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