Rules and laws keep society stable. It cannot work if individuals are free to do whatever they want. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Why?
Countries, where there are laws which equally treat every person, are the most prosperous nations. It is often argued that community should be based on rules and it might not work if people were allowed to perform anything they like. I concur with the mentioned statement and in this essay, I will highlight the reasons along with examples followed by a lucid conclusion, Thereafter.
To begin with, the very first factor encountered in this regard is that such fraternities which having legislation have rock-bottom crimes. In , the constitution there are clear punishments and the victims and the perpetrators have the opportunities to prove themselves innocent. Thus, fear of retribution prevents them to be part of any crime. To cite an example, various fines on girls' harassment in my city significantly let down the graph, if there is no such regulation it may be at its peak now.
Furthermore, Another reason is that It gives a sense of trust in national institutions. The sufferers knew that the law enforcement teams could provide them security and they will not be abandoned alone. Therefore, They will help the security personals to perform their investigations and in some ,cases authorities grant them cash or other facilities to recover their loss. For example, In my neighbour ,state there are zero rates of keeping personal weapons since people are thinking that the police are doing their guarding duty enough well.
To conclusion, There should be charters in any community because it will reduce offence statistics and sustain people's faith in their legislative houses. Given this situation, it seems that government should provide online crime reporting conveniences to the public so it will save their time commuting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23571428571 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86372298061 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2252742419 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108585914095 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336183216178 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325505071463 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617547091413 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433230013143 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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