Dear Mr. Parsa,
I hope you are doing well,
I am writing this email to inform you regarding an issue with my starting date of work. Despite our agreement to start my work on Monday of the next week, I have been forbidden from being in public because of a health problem.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. Two days ago, I visited my family doctor after almost one day of feeling awfully sick and having body pain. I was diagnosed as having flu which is recently picking up in the country. He prescribed me some medicine and asked me seriously to stay home until getting better.
Hopefully, I could be there on Monday of the week after next week as the doctor anticipated. He said the average treatment period for this disease is in the range of 7-10 days. I also have an appointment to visit the doctor the next Friday. I'll let you know if anything new comes up.
Thanks in advance for your understanding and support. I look forward to starting my work in the near future,
Yours Faithfully,
Masoud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...nt to visit the doctor the next Friday. Ill let you know if anything new comes up. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5027027027 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42650328425 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686486486486 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9638671291 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4166666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252968176615 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076756285579 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639152435248 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129333706566 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559123128564 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.