Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly argued that many people believe earning a high salary is more essential than job satisfaction. I strongly disagree on this point of view. I believe that convenience plays a more important role for career progression due to the fact that having a lot of money does not guarantee your work-life balance and happiness.
On the one hand, for career advancement, job satisfaction is a more crucial aspect. It is defined as a person's feeling of fulfillment that motivates them to work harder at their job, which leads to better results. Moreover, they could work longer hours without realizing that time flies quickly therefore the employee will achieve better performance or job prospects, which will effectively help the company's growth as well as customers’ goodwill. For instance, one of my friends joined as a freelance airport engineer in a rural area after his graduation. Even though he is paid less, he enjoys his job and helps his coworkers for maintaining aircraft and airports, as a matter of fact, helping others makes him cheerful.
On the other hand, in order to ensure work-life balance and pleasure are not only about the money you earn but also the gratification you get. Many job seekers do not realize throughout the job description that they would be doing. In particular, if an employee can not work productively because of the lack of knowledge and interest in his job, there would be a high possibility of making mistakes which affects his incentives. Again, If someone appreciates his job no matter how much salary he could get, he still has a chance to prove his skills by showing off his capability. While it is true that the role of the leader is needed to be concerned, throughout the emotional approach many workers will be satisfied in their workplace.
To conclude, while a person with a higher pay scale may take delight the benefits of luxury, he may make mistakes that affect his career if he does not pay attention. As has been noted, regardless of the pay, I prefer to do work that I adore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in particular, as a matter of fact, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85754985755 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76632161685 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586894586895 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5553562527 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189570757979 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643153407426 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566864894007 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105871875236 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606250995982 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.