Some believe that lot of scientific research is a waste of time and money To what extent do you agree or disagree

Due to the progressive development of the society, doing reseaching plays a significant role in our daily basis. Thanks to the sheer determination and hard work of impeccable work, the successful research on various life changing topics has changed the fate of a host of countries. Although many opine that scientific research is merely a waste of time and money, I completely disagree with this stament.
To begin with, the imagine of modern word can never be possible without doing research. The world can not go ahead but for scientific research. First and foremost, the tests have brought many unprecedented changes for the welfare of humankind. There were myriad fatal viruses and diseases, which considered as menace for a human kind as a result many people were dying owing to several epidemics but with the accurate scientifil researches, a great deal of epidemics has been eradicated to a large extent leading to the decrease of the people's death .Secondly, the researchs not only contribute to the enhancement of life in providing the essential tools and machines supporting inhibitant to time saving and labor saving but also make any country considered as a developed country in the world's competition. For example, America spent a major portion of its economy on scientific research, on account of which, it is known as a super power.
Meanwhile, every reseach is a outcome of the relentless effort, patience and intense pratice, which can be ensured by hard work of the scientists. Morever, it can be unfair when it comes to money as doing research is important for the improvement of country to be more innovation, providing a stable and lavish life style's of people and becoming a methods which can cure many problems happened.Therefore, it is completely an appropriate to invest money on research and researches are deemed as a cure of many intractable problem which signifies that no research means no development in any aspect of area.
In conclusion, I hold the view that all the countries need to spend money on doing research for innovation and advancement, as it ultimately brings humongous fruitful outcomes in people's life.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09039548023 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98140791086 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567796610169 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.415146522 49.4020404114 315% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.818181818 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1818181818 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195870934683 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809685349015 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731579321843 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125407094255 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364592073708 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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