The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of water which has various uses (industrial, agricultural and domestic) in 6 regions in the world.
Overall, it can be seen that the majority of water is used for industrial purposes in Europe and North America, while the remaining areas exploit this resource for agriculture.
It can be seen that North America and Europe share similar patterns of water consumption. Specifically, roughly half of water is used in the industry sector. While the percentage of water used in agriculture is 39% and 32% in North America and Europe, respectively; these regions allocated only small amounts of water for domestic use (13% and 15%).
Regarding other areas, the highest proportion of water goes to agriculture, with Central Asia taking the leading position of 88%. In South America, there is nearly one-fifth of water used for domestic purposes, whereas this figure in the other 3 regions is less than 10%. Finally, most aforementioned regions have the least water consumption in industry, with the exception of South East Asia which used 12% of water for industrial purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...he least water consumption in industry, with the exception of South East Asia which used 12% of water...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, regarding, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20555555556 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82599813024 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561111111111 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5804165592 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.125 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296153975907 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135828514385 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650969387441 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19282715381 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278566066067 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.