The given line graph compares USA ,Japan, Sweden in term of the number of people who are over 65 from 1940 to 2040
from basic observation, there was a upward fluctuation in the percentage of Sweden and USA' population aged over 65. Moreover, according to current prediction, this figure for all countries will have a growth.
From 1940 to 2000 there was gradually increase in the percentage of people over 65 in USA and Sweden, followed by a steady decline. Whereas ,a slight reduce of 3% was seen in the figure for Japan in the same period. from the beginning of 2000 until the present, the number of population aged 65 in Sweden likewise that in USA had a small jump. By contrast this figure for USA had no changes
Over the period of prediction proportion of population aged 65 in 3 countries a progress. Especially 15. expected for 20 among years will have Japan it is upsurge suddenly and the the 3 figures. touch over the next the highest point at 21 in 2040 even though it started at the lowest point of all... In addition, In 2040 this figure for. Japan will be couple, HONG that HA in the present
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
The given line graph compares USA ,Japan, Sweden in term of the number of ...
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Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n line graph compares USA ,Japan, Sweden in term of the number of people who are ...
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Line 2, column 35, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...2040 from basic observation, there was a upward fluctuation in the percentage of...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n, followed by a steady decline. Whereas ,a slight reduce of 3% was seen in the fi...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: From
...he figure for Japan in the same period. from the beginning of 2000 until the present...
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Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...on of population aged 65 in 3 countries a progress. Especially 15. expected for 20 among y...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Expected
... 3 countries a progress. Especially 15. expected for 20 among years will have Japan it i...
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...l have Japan it is upsurge suddenly and the the 3 figures. touch over the next the high...
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...l have Japan it is upsurge suddenly and the the 3 figures. touch over the next the high...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Touch
...upsurge suddenly and the the 3 figures. touch over the next the highest point at 21 i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, moreover, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48179826244 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529702970297 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.356597801 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176972575249 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654594577233 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592138241076 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121872596155 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233606197521 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.