In order to be well informed, a person must get information from many different news sources.
Do you agree or disagree?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
No one can deny the fact that nowadays, with the advancement of technology, it has been easier to know about the happenings all around the world . In the given scenario, it is perceived that in orderr to be well informed about the news whether we can rely on one source or we have to opt for many more has been a debatable one. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that we cannot trust only one media or source so we have to search more information on other sources too. I feel this way for several reason which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To start with, there are many media available in internet through which we can updated about the things around us. However, choosing a right source is a major concern since there are tons of online source which only aims to earn money rather than providing a real news.. For instance last month there was a news of buss accident and almost all of them succeed to save their lives since the accident was not that worse. One news channel told out 50 only 30 could save and others were missing. This was totally the fake one. At the meantime , another channel was telecasting the live update about the incident. Therefore, we should be mindful about these type of channels and choose the appropriate one.
Secondly, we have newspaper also as a source of news. The main problem of this is it takes a lot of time to print. So, this is not that reliable as anything could happen in any minute. Drawing from my own experience, few months back there was a election and i wanted to be updated about each and every single situation. This was only possible with the online sources although there were merely few trustworthy medias. Needless to say, newspaper is one of the reliable source of news. In addition, just because we have to wait for a long for a news to be printed, we are compelled to search other sources to be well updated about the current affairs.
All things considered, everyone is eager know about the current happenings throughout the world. Indeed, to be updated about the things, we have to choose best source of them all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...bout the happenings all around the world . In the given scenario, it is perceived ...
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Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one medium', 'a medium', or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: one medium; a medium; media
...f the opinion that we cannot trust only one media or source so we have to search more inf...
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Line 2, column 486, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
... other sources too. I feel this way for several reason which I will explore in the subsequent ...
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Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'update'
Suggestion: update
...ilable in internet through which we can updated about the things around us. However, ch...
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Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding things'?
Suggestion: the surrounding things
...rnet through which we can updated about the things around us. However, choosing a right source is a ...
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Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... money rather than providing a real news.. For instance last month there was a new...
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Line 4, column 306, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...ews.. For instance last month there was a news of buss accident and almost all of the...
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Line 4, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... instance last month there was a news of buss accident and almost all of them suc...
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Line 4, column 540, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...as totally the fake one. At the meantime , another channel was telecasting the liv...
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Line 6, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t that reliable as anything could happen in any minute. Drawing from my own exper...
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Line 6, column 245, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n experience, few months back there was a election and i wanted to be updated abo...
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Line 6, column 260, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ew months back there was a election and i wanted to be updated about each and eve...
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Line 6, column 543, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
... because we have to wait for a long for a news to be printed, we are compelled to sear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54761904762 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38243078688 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6126519696 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.95 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131999899684 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427691384004 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416368521181 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861013547034 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370087955989 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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