GENDER INEQUALITY :
To begin with, there was a lot of advancements being done by mankind over many
generations but many people are still aruguing that gender equality is a myth, and
certainly believe that people still now a days are not providing the same equality
towards men and women that mostly women are often neglected and treated unequal in
most cases such as in their work place, wages, employment etc....In this essay we can see
the various ways how this inequality is happening in today's world.
Firstly, women in workplaces are treated in some places or offices in such a manner that
most of their superiors certainly don't respect their point of view in any concern or
matter of importance which is happeing all over the world. For example, recently, there
was an issue between a women employee and his boss over inequality opinion on an
important topic of discussion in a meeting.
Furthermore, Transgenders are the one which are affected at a higher rate as compared
to both men and women as they are facing inequalities in all aspects of their life that is
from the day they are born in all modes of work, respect, media etc. According to the
survey conducted by the American research association, in comparision with men and
women transgenders are the one which are mostly affected by this gender inequality in
our society.
In conclusion, I put forth my arguments on how gender inequality still exists in our
soceity on above passages and this can only avoided by educating the children from
their early lives on respecting their opposite genders.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...nd certainly believe that people still now a days are not providing the same equality to...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...certainly believe that people still now a days are not providing the same equality to...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ir work place, wages, employment etc....In this essay we can see the various ways...
^^
Line 10, column 24, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...recently, there was an issue between a women employee and his boss over inequality o...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99622641509 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.689785274 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569811320755 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.5024630542 215% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.855281095 50.4703680194 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.666666667 104.977214359 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.1666666667 20.9669160288 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5 7.25397266985 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.12807881773 460% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211774496854 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116462765031 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754648648333 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637624399603 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108435050172 0.0609392437508 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 12.6369458128 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.9458128079 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.94827586207 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.3980295567 188% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...nd certainly believe that people still now a days are not providing the same equality to...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...certainly believe that people still now a days are not providing the same equality to...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ir work place, wages, employment etc....In this essay we can see the various ways...
^^
Line 10, column 24, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...recently, there was an issue between a women employee and his boss over inequality o...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99622641509 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.689785274 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569811320755 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.5024630542 215% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.855281095 50.4703680194 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.666666667 104.977214359 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.1666666667 20.9669160288 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5 7.25397266985 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.12807881773 460% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211774496854 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116462765031 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754648648333 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637624399603 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108435050172 0.0609392437508 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 12.6369458128 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.9458128079 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.94827586207 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.3980295567 188% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.