Today, human life and how to improve it is one of the popular topics among people. However, many things threaten human lifestyles, such as climate change and the economy. In this short essay, I will elaborate on how each of them can damage the way people live, and why I think the economy has much more influence.
Although climate change affects human being’s life gradually, in most cases, it will last forever, namely global warming and desertification. In my country, Iran, due to changes in precipitation patterns in the last few decades, deserts are growing rapidly. It means plenty of people have to leave their hometowns forever and immigrate to other areas to begin a new life. On the contrary, in a couple of other areas, the high amount of rainfall has led to catastrophic floods that have damaged lots of lands and properties.
Nowadays, the economy classifies people into different groups in which they have to follow a certain lifestyle that will also affect their mindset. Of course, this classification is not rigid, and individuals can ascend or descend due to many external and internal reasons. Consequently, almost all people are involved with economic problems. For instance, many people need to work extended hours to earn living expenses. Also, every day, so many people get laid off from work. Hence, economic issues are the main concern for all of us.
In conclusion, although climate change’s impacts on the way people live are irreversible and permanent, the economy is the main cause of anxiety in human-being. Regardless of the economic level, they are always thinking about their economic issues nonstop. Besides, I believe, looking deeply, climate change can be one of the greatest external reasons for economic problems. As a result, in my opinion, the economy has the greatest impact on how mankind lives.
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- TPO 49 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, hence, however, if, look, so, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, as a result, in most cases, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07236842105 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69084577216 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1884625803 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7058823529 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7058823529 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209397655045 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627896966386 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457775586791 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124699128003 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375805295326 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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