Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival
periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree
with this opinion?
Some people argue that we are no longer remember the original meaning of traditional or religious festival, instead of, people tend to enjoy in these occasions. While I agree with the idea that enjoyment is seem as the priority during festival periods, I don't agree that people have forgotten the meaning of historical and religious festivals.
On the one hand, religious and traditional festivals are seem as the time for celebration in recent years. Most people choose travelling and experiencing new things in other areas, which is opposite to the traditional way that offsprings coming back to the hometown and gather together. For example, in the UK, Christmas is looking forward to the holiday period as the occasion for giving presents, shopping, decorating home rather than gathering family. The similar situation was happened in Viet Nam with the Lunar New Year, when people spend time travelling with friends or working in big cities for higher salaries instead of coming back home after a long time. The major reason lead to this trend is due to the development of the word which is affect on the recognition of people. Most people do not want to visit relatives or face up to famlily problems, in another way, enjoyment is becoming the people's priority during festival period.
On the other hand, the underlying meaning of religious and historical festivals has not been forgotten. In the UK, children are still taught in detail about the Christmas or Easter and they can sing Christmas song which has a traditional content or perform plays telling about the Jesus's birth. The same was true for the historical occasions in Viet Nam. There are a lot of appealing videos or programs, which arouse patriotism as well as most people was learned about history at an early age. Besides, parents' effort in passing knowledge on the next generations also plays an important role in keeping the underlying meaning of such festivals.
In conclusion, although people mainly want to spend time for themselves rather than for famlily, I believe that the original meaning of religious and tradional festivals are still sustainable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...I agree with the idea that enjoyment is seem as the priority during festival periods...
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Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the priority during festival periods, I dont agree that people have forgotten the me...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...religious and traditional festivals are seem as the time for celebration in recent y...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to travel'.
Suggestion: to travel
...ion in recent years. Most people choose travelling and experiencing new things in other ar...
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Line 3, column 750, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...to the development of the word which is affect on the recognition of people. Most people ...
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Line 3, column 904, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... another way, enjoyment is becoming the peoples priority during festival period. On...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, look, so, still, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09686609687 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6713955927 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541310541311 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.3446883437 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.785714286 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351993835626 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118805013218 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108797647091 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222261141577 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957625200917 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.