Money is very important in the world today because it is used for almost everything. There are some people who think that students in primary and secondary schools should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill. However, in my opinion, I strongly believe students in primary and secondary institutions should be taught this very important skill to enable them navigate through life. In this essay I will discuss how learning financial management skills will present numerous job opportunities to an individual, and the wastage of resources as a result of lack of cash management knowledge
To begin with, a lot of job opportunities will be offered to an individual once they know how to manage cash. This skill will make the person to be sort after given that all organizations depend on money. To illustrate, Ada graduated from the University of Uyo at the age of 18, and she was employed that same year because of her vast knowledge in financial management. To summarize, if someone is very skillful in managing funds, then it will present numerous jobs opportunities to the individual.
To continue, when a person does not know how to manage money, it will make them waste resources all the time. The financial management skill enables one to have a plan for the cash before it is made available. For instance, my elder brother whose name is "Chidi" was in charge of our late Dad's wealth, yet finances were wasted because of not knowing how to manage money. Clearly, it is true that a person will squander resources if they do not have the knowledge of managing cash.
In this essay I have discussed how how learning financial management skills will present numerous job opportunities to an individual, and the wastage of resources as a result of lack of cash management knowledge
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, then, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91290322581 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86895362478 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5084438741 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360360800213 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156629149813 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19861577257 0.0667982634062 297% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229314880718 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171444552492 0.056905535591 301% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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