Governments all around the world are in charge of decision making because they have the authority required to do so. There are some people who believe that government should not spend too much money in exploring outer space. However, in my opinion, I believe that it is irrelevant for the leaders to spend such humongous amount given that these funds can be channeled to more relevant things. In this essay I will discuss how the huge amounts of cash used for space exploration can be used to make the world a better place.
To begin with, it is better the authorities use money for humanitarian purposes rather than using such huge amount for outer space exploration. For instance, the government made a very good decision when they helped the internally displaced people of Haiti, and the IDP’s received aids such as food and shelter;many lives were saved. Similarly, the governments around the world decided to manufacture vaccines after the Covid-19 pandemic struck in order to eliminate the virus. In summary, the authorities should consider using such large amount of cash for humanitarian purposes before outer space exploration.
To continue, the government should not spend too much money in exploring outer space as these funds are required to improve infrastructure in the society. For example, a lot of cash have beeven used to build schools for the African children rather than exploring outer space. In addition, given that sports has become a major source of income globally, new facilities for various kinds of sports have been built rather than using same amounts to explore space; this has benefitEd the society. Therefore, given that leaders spend too much money on space exploration, it is best the funds are used to develop our infrastructure.
To conclude, I have discussed how the huge amounts of cash used for space exploration can be used to make the world a better place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04746835443 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67015670346 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48417721519 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5464732725 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.692307692 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306396052703 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152482115512 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187800711588 0.0667982634062 281% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198635312425 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111973391756 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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