Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there are more and more developed countries often support poorer countries by giving money. Nevertheless, this help does not deal with poverty which is dramatically increasing through the pandemic. Hence, rich countries ought to provide them with other kinds of help in the lieu of financial help. This essay agrees with this statement and will suggest some solutions for developed countries in order to help poorer countries.
In the first place, only when a country has a valuable education will its economy have the opportunity to develop. Most of the under-developed countries do not have chance to access good study which is seen as the key to development. For instance, the third world is considered a clear example of having poor education. Some teachers do not have enough knowledge to help their children to access to good education. Therefore, rich countries should invest in better schools as well as provide more opportunities for them to have occupations in order to be able to earn for a living.
In second place, most of infectious diseases are believed as the biggest issue in those countries which have poor medical conditions. This is because the expensive costs made people could not be affordable medical expenses. In addition, children had severe due to the poor situation that they could not have basic good habits like well cleaning and good nutrition. For that reason, developed countries should invest more medical equipment as well as provide financial aid in improving the health conditions in sub-developed countries in order to help them to get better health development.
In conclusion, helping under-developed countries by giving capital might not be the best way. Instead of giving financial aid, it could be more efficient if rich countries provide improvements in well-learning conditions as well as better health development. This could be more beneficial for both kinds of countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26213592233 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91395151216 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498381877023 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7281692538 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.625 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362079581496 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131271009786 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103721538688 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241042364558 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829996175794 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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