Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope you are doing well,
I am writing to ask a favour regarding the industrial designing seminar which is going on next April in Los Angles. As this seminar is completely in line with my expertise and experience, I would like to attend.
Let me explain my situation. It has been almost 5 years that I have been working as an Industrial designer for CoverTech company in Toronto. However, as an Iranian, for traveling to the US, I need to apply for a travel Visa in advance. Thus, in order to fill out a Visa application request, I must provide more detail in this respect. Besides, I should request a leave of absence for the seminar period from my workplace prior to the event.
Could you please supply me with some detailed information so that I would be able to arrange everything for participating in the seminar? In this regard, I need specific dates for the beginning and the end of the event, plus the program's scope and schedule, some information about accommodation and how much participants should pay.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon,
Yours Faithfully,
Masoud
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...information about accommodation and how much participants should pay. I am looking ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, regarding, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70408163265 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76968927419 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9745380874 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307428235665 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972206128369 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726749572422 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139860428052 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958734800118 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...information about accommodation and how much participants should pay. I am looking ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, regarding, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70408163265 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76968927419 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9745380874 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307428235665 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972206128369 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726749572422 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139860428052 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958734800118 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.