Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope you are doing well,
I am writing to ask a favour regarding the industrial designing seminar which is going to be held on the next April in Los Angles. As this seminar is completely in line with my expertise and experience, I am interested in attending the seminar and some of the workshops that will be held.
Let me explain my situation. As an Iranian, for traveling to the US, I need to apply for a travel Visa in advance which might take a long time to proceed. In order to fill out a Visa application request, I must know the specific date in this respect. Besides, I should request a leave of absence for the seminar period from my workplace prior to the event. Moreover, I am eager to register for participating in some workshops as well. In this matter, I checked out the seminar's official website for my required information, but I couldn't find the detailed schedule of the program.
Could you please supply me with some detailed information so that I would be able to arrange everything for participating in the seminar? I would also appreciate it if you provide some information about accommodation and the costs of attending, accommodation, food, etc for one person.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon,
Yours Faithfully,
Masoud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...interested in attending the seminar and some of the workshops that will be held. Let me ex...
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Line 4, column 469, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'seminars'' or 'seminar's'?
Suggestion: seminars'; seminar's
...well. In this matter, I checked out the seminars official website for my required inform...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 530, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...site for my required information, but I couldnt find the detailed schedule of the progr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69911504425 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89510403592 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606194690265 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.1228035453 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5454545455 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306648634809 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101279298505 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722942364511 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140639646054 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935356539881 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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