Dear Faith,
I hope your day is going great. It has been a long time we saw each other, but I have not forgotten all the good times we spent together. I am writing this letter to you because you know about Canada which is the country where I recently found a job opportunity.
However, the nature of my future job has to do with care giving. I have to take care of the elderly, and I have to run errands for them too. In addition, I will start working on the 4th of February 2023, which is the resumption date of the company, after I have arrived Canada on the 30th of January 2023.
I applied for this job because I am very passionate about health-related work. My late Dad was a pharmacist, so it contributed to my passion given that I was raised around a health practitioner. Also, I love taking care of people because it gives me a sense of joy.
So, I will need details regarding accommodation, and I will need to know the best area to work since the company's management said we can choose any state of our choice. Lastly, I want you to give me a general advice based on my job and relocation.
Take care.
Adam.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Faith, I hope your day is going great. It has b...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, lastly, regarding, so, as to, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30841121495 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55569458465 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621495327103 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1370970198 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8181818182 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229711065907 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771629274115 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098067237316 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126744561446 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719301940834 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Faith, I hope your day is going great. It has b...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, lastly, regarding, so, as to, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30841121495 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55569458465 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621495327103 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1370970198 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8181818182 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229711065907 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771629274115 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098067237316 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126744561446 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719301940834 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.