Dear Sir,
I hope your day is going well. I am writing this letter to inform you about a computer system problem that I have just encountered.
The problem has to do with the Central Processing Unit of the system. The computer system fails to boot after I have switched on the power. Also, I have noticed that the keyboard is faulty, and I tried to see wether I could fix it due to the little knowledge I have about keyboards. I could not fix it.
My work is being affected since the office works I do are usually done using the computer. In addition, the previous jobs I have attended to are inside the system, so I do not have access to them for final cross-check before I push them out to to the payroll department.
I suggest that the IT department should take a look at the system first before referring it to any other person who specializes in repairing computer systems. To add, I prefer we stop buying secondhand Central Processing Units since the nature of our job needs the computer systems to always be in good condition.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Grant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...inal cross-check before I push them out to to the payroll department. I suggest t...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... payroll department. I suggest that the IT department should take a look at the sy...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Adam Grant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, second, so, well, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53465346535 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51954423004 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618811881188 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6539192935 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343512368866 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10531098485 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854366992287 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161926893409 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110873197116 0.0580467560999 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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