The information about alternation the urban areas of Nelson is illustrated by the given map. The year under consideration from 2000 to today.
Overall, it is crystal clear that almost all things are changed in Nelson city from past to nowadays only university and train station remain unchanged. As there new shops, hall and line, even road is made of pedestrians only.
At the first glance, it can be clearly seen from map that in 2000, in Nelson city there was city centre, left to it was old market and road on it's bottom. Next to city centre on it's South was port. However, in North-east of centre was railway station. The academy was situated on top on the Nelson city, while there was plants on right of it.
Moving towards today outlay of Nelson city, the restaurant and bar or clubs are build at port, as well as, road is allow to pedestrians only. Whereas, bike rental scheme is started in the city centre, and rail line is construction from it to university. The train station is demolished and new one is build in between city centre and university. Surprisingly, Old market is replaced by new shop and plants are cut down are new shopping centre in installed. New covered market in built on the right side on city centre and hall of residence on the opposite side of university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay outlay of Nelson city, the restaurant and bar or clubs are build at port, as w...
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Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'allowed'.
Suggestion: allowed
... are build at port, as well as, road is allow to pedestrians only. Whereas, bike rent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60173160173 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49364928644 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528138528139 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3060625449 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7692307692 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0732099085036 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028136889624 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295370294819 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0491828076146 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010132056541 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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