In today's highly competitive market, potential businesses give the priority of sales and productivity by several ways. And the issue as to whether allocating budget for marketing and promotion make a imbalance on finance has remained source of controversy. I write up a few causes and managements on this situation.
There are several reasons asscociated with this. the greed of people was born or was the attributable to the persistence or the promotion to workload to have the most suitable condition in the future. To adapt this ambition, Big companies suggest local residents to buy several stores and monopolize the product. Then, they hit the market with a higher cost that attach with massive sales to maximize profits and pay attention to customers, whlist, Local companies are faced with losses in sales and possible closure because of not having marketing campaigns or methods of boosting products out of market, so this can lead to be mass closure and under the pressure about financial burden or demand for the contribute of incomes for society. To be specific, for example, Family businesses have a long experiment in market but not enough potential finance such as construction investers or pay for abundant staff salaries as big companies, so domestic revenues can't survive to fierce competition, which can cause a dilemma of whether a country how to develop.
To tackle this problem, several steps could be followed to minimize the concerns. the top hit that businesses should prioritize making money. the demand in knowledge-based society is greater that require employees to have skillfully about their expertise to assure that bussiness can cover the running costs and staffs boost productivity. In addtion, Businesses already contribute to the environment by paying taxes, the development of business have to be associated with having social responsibilites, so each companies should spent part of budgets for society to protect the environment as much as possible.
In conclusion, having a potential finance is a big opportunity to dominate the market, but the responsibility or also the reliablity with society is very important. this essay presented clearly the phenomenon about the abusement of financial strengthen that to be superior to local businesses, which cause the imbalance seriously in world's ever-changing industrialization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...budget for marketing and promotion make a imbalance on finance has remained sourc...
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...ses and managements on this situation. There are several reasons asscociated wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39189189189 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08977081848 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556756756757 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.10308351 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.5 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296827061647 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954471618188 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358106428548 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173189752225 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403925178767 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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