Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traffic is always a controversial topic of debate for a long time. Some people think that the best solution to make road safety is to increase the age of driving cars and riding motorcycles. But, I strongly believe that the better way is impose stricter punishments for driving offence.
On the one hand, limiting the minimum legal ages for driving is a good way to raise people‘s awareness. As they are not mature enough to fully understand the serious consequences of their actions. That can pose a serious threat to another people. It also reduce the amount of traffic accidents on the road . Raising the age of driving, therefore, they can make sure the youngest drivers are mature enough to protect their health and other’s safety when driving.
On the other hand, government should enact some rules and policies in order to prevent bad driving habits. Depend on the facts that, nowadays, there are many youngsters still drive motorbikes on the road without driving licenses. So the more effective way is impose stricter punishment on those. For example, driver who run a red light or speeding should be given a longer prison and heavier fine. These solutions could help us become safer when commute by cars or motorbikes.
In conclusion, from my view,enacting stricter punishments for driving offences is much more better than increase the minimum age of driving. Although there are still some benefits of this topic. I believe that drawbacks of this topic are outweigh the advantages as the reasons I mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: imposed
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a good way to raise people‘s awareness. As they are not mature enough to fully und...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'poses'.
Suggestion: poses
...consequences of their actions. That can pose a serious threat to another people. It ...
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Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'imposed'.
Suggestion: imposed
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Message: Put a space after the comma
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...motorbikes. In conclusion, from my view,enacting stricter punishments for driving offenc...
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Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...elieve that drawbacks of this topic are outweigh the advantages as the reasons I mention...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01176470588 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62619717864 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1638753313 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.875 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322161583988 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906856011757 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121091114752 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192801966826 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10396882525 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.