You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home
now means that you must change the dates of the visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
explain the important event
apologise for the situation
suggest a new arrangement
Dear Joseph,
How are you? I hope you are in good condition. In this month, I want to go England to waste my holiday. But, there are events at my house which my sister birthday and my all family want to vacation to Bali island. Therefore, I apologize to you that I can’t to visit your country. Next year, I hope you and me can meet in your country England with new arrange schedule. I hope can meet your all family especially your father and mother. I think your father and mother will be like my souvenir and your sister may love my gift such as bag because this bag is famous brand from Indonesia. My last words that I am sorry to you that prepare for my trip to your country England and I promise next year I will go to your country to enjoy my holiday with you.
Thank for your attention. I hope you can reply as soon as possible my letter.
Yours Faithfully
Huda
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26785714286 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19937858416 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5798292376 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.75 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232165495373 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10389762531 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502136995097 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190187094318 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166198077289 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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