Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Advanced technology has brought about numerous critical invention for human kind in the last century, especially computers. I strongly agree with this statement and the reason behind it will be stated in upcoming paragraphs.
There are two main reasons why computers are the most useful invention. Firstly, our work and study becomes more and more effective thanks to the invention of computers. Computers has wide screens therefore it will be very productive to search for information or do our work remotely. For example, when doing research on a certain topic, you can spontaneously watch videos while reading articles about it. In addition, computers have strong capacity and memory storage. This helps with performing multiple tasks and storing information, which is more superior compared to those of smartphones.
Apart from practical benefits mentioned above, since computers are invented, they also have certain drawbacks. To begin with, since computers allow us to expose with many kinds of information online, children may access to violent content or even pornography. This can poison their minds if they are using computers unrestrictedly. Furthermore, overusing this technology invention can create dependence and laziness. Because computers provide us with profound applications, it is understandable that many individuals would rely on them to do caculation or search information. For instance, a lot of people use the latest technology called ChatGPT to write their essays. This cause them to become passive in their own profession.
In conclusion, computers assists our community profoundly concerning of work and study efficiency in a way that other inventions can not. Although we may need several restrictions in order to use them effectively, I opine this opinion in a positive view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.559566787 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00854825253 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653429602888 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4304529939 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.5882352941 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207494748334 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637499217159 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036289521518 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124563904476 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471611511724 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.