Governments need to increase the amount of investment in art, music, and painting. As we can see in social countries, all the art based topic such as music, painting and others are helping people to recover their spiritual problems.
As a sample, in 15th-century music was used for healing crazy people and also it is proved by research, art is a way to improve people's social skills and help them be part of society.
Generally people after prison life, they need to get support and treatment with music can be very helpful for them to become part for society again.
On the other hand, art, music, and also paints are the way to send information to our future generations, they will criticize us with our drawings or music as we are doing now for our ancestors. As everybody accepts that we are still looking at Monolisa with full eyes and appreciative feelings.
Otherwise, governments need to protect balance between the social stuff and the economical needs of people, the balance which separate as like a waste of money instead of helping people to get better education or any major problem.
Tos um up, I disagree with the question, as I explain in my essay, governments need to invest money in all types of art with protecting the social-economic balance which is a part of the art.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: hsiaotrio
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... better education or any major problem. Tos um up, I disagree with the question,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73451327434 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65603219279 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58407079646 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9514376777 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.75 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.9669160288 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227719710696 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11252326143 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922831385932 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119537520733 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970718370385 0.0609392437508 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.1260098522 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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