The diagram show two methods of using water to produce electricity. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictures describe two distinct electricity generation techniques by harnessing water energy.
Overall, there are six main stages in the first diagram, beginning with allowing the water to enter the dam, ending with releasing the water into river. Meanwhile, the second process involves four major stages, starting with water entering the lower chamber and ending wih air rising from the generator.
In the first diagram, firstly, the gate of the hydroelectric dam is opened to let the water in and then closed. Due to the width and angle of the penstock, the water is accerlerated until it reaches the spindle. Subsequently, water turns the turbine and spindle in order to produce electricity. The rotation of the spindle afterwards makes the generator create electric power, The distribution of electricity to power line occurs at the following stage. At the same time, used water is released into river.
As for the second diagram, the first stage involves the entry of water waves to the lowest chamber, which is almost the same as the first one. This is followed by a stage where the lower chamber pushed the water up to the upper chamber. Corresponding to the first diagram, the water makes the spindle rotates in order to generate electricity. Once the rotation of spindle has happened, the air rises and turns turbine and spindle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, then, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04932735426 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6354668687 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52466367713 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4840126978 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8333333333 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194694528787 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769431499557 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405239092108 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127561487363 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312512295408 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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