IELTS Task 2: The advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform to work.
With respect to students, wearing a uniform that is a familiar thing on every weekdays. Uniform as a students symbol which bring to them various advantages. There are some drawbacks coexisting with benefits.
Uniform of school may enable to synchronize themselves with their school that are beneficial to enhence the own place. Besides, when the puplis wear uniform, they also receive a lot of preferential vouchers, for instance, buying books, tickets stationeries, ect,.. Along with that, the school cunstom also aid the community identify which students are at which school. In situations such as students lost their way, accidents, ect,..
On the other hand, this suits also exist several ostacles which make people disgust it. For difficulty financual families, uniform that the thing what unecessary because of their cost. In case, the family can not afford some uniforms, they may have to wash the suit immediately. This can be exhausting and take up time that would otherwise be spent studying or resting. It is cleared that the costume of school make people becaming uncomfortable, restrained and leading to lower of efficiencies in work.
To sum up, although the uniform brings to the people variety convenience, the disapproval of it still too much. Depending on personaities, the appriciation of uniform always changes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...r thing on every weekdays. Uniform as a students symbol which bring to them various adva...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... buying books, tickets stationeries, ect,.. Along with that, the school cunstom al...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...buying books, tickets stationeries, ect,.. Along with that, the school cunstom als...
^^
Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... students lost their way, accidents, ect,.. On the other hand, this suits also...
^^
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...students lost their way, accidents, ect,.. On the other hand, this suits also ...
^^
Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...rsonaities, the appriciation of uniform always changes
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, if, may, so, still, for instance, such as, to sum up, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35071090047 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82824446958 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649289099526 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.806580398 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.6428571429 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132294309742 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452403767584 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450083785477 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851590358576 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292241471696 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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