Over recent years, citizens in various nations have had a longer life-span compared with the past. While the matter is advantageous in a few aspects, the demerits are more significant.
There are some benefits the increase of longevity gains. This is firstly because the elderly can enjoy a long and fulfilling retirement. It means that they have more spare time so as to travel around the world and participate in favourite activities, which seems impossible to be performed while working and bringing up a family. In addition to this, it is argued that the phenomenon takes the burden off of busy parents. For example, grandparents can look after kids and give advice to young generations, who are inexperienced in life.
However, the disadvantages of the situation are much more considerable. An important reason is that health-care costs rise significantly. The elderly are so prone to chronic illnesses such as diabetes and bone diseases, which are not cured easily that they usually have a general check-upnand buy medicine . Another reason is economic pressure to sustain older generations. In other words, the government have to take solutions to rise pension funds for all retired people.
In conclusion, increasing life expectancy is associated with many shortcomings, which far outweigh the benefits.
- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion Write at least 250 words 11
- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion Write at least 250 words 11
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- In many countries around the world life expectancy is increasing Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion 73
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...It means that they have more spare time so as to travel around the world and participate...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...have a general check-upnand buy medicine . Another reason is economic pressure to ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33653846154 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03293430627 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7722831521 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3846153846 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168724966403 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497121500075 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480302474902 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972432958249 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545882730117 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...It means that they have more spare time so as to travel around the world and participate...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...have a general check-upnand buy medicine . Another reason is economic pressure to ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33653846154 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03293430627 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7722831521 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3846153846 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168724966403 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497121500075 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480302474902 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972432958249 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545882730117 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.